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 If you want your Statement of Purpose or Personal Statement to be successful, you have to write it in such a way as to make those in charge of the selection process curious about you and to look forward to meeting you. You need to portray yourself in your statement as the kind of person that they want to have in their program. I am a practiced master at drafting your story in the best, most eloquent fashion possible, in the way that is most appealing to those who make the selection. I am so certain of my ability that I draft the first paragraph of your statement free of charge and at no further obligation.  If you really like the first paragraph that I produce, then I would then be honored to finish the statement on your behalf. 

Sample 1st Paragraph, Dentist from India, International Dentist Program DDS

A dentist from India, still only 24 years old, I am a young woman for whom serving the neediest members of my community as a dentist provides me with the ultimate sense of satisfaction and inner peace. It is because of my high level of motivation to focus on the underserved in dentistry-- with respect to both practice and research—that I will be completing my MPH Degree in May of next year, 2015, at the University of XXXX Health Science Centre, in XXXX where I was awarded a Dean’s Scholarship. Since this past March I have also been fully immersed in research, serving as an assistant to Dr. XXXX, studying cancer survivor patients, cleaning and analyzing data. I hope to spend the rest of my life heavily engaged in the battle against oral cancer primarily as a statistician, unlocking the mysteries behind the challenges. My native India has some of the highest oral cancer rates in the world. Thus, giving my all to research in this area will enable me to feel connected to my people back home as well.

With My Son Davy Dylan

Sample 1st Paragraph for International Dentist, CAAPID Application

I am grateful that I had the opportunity to practice dentistry full time in my native India before coming to America to further advance my career in 2012. I have now served here in the USA as a dental observer and until last year as a research intern at ASER doing research in the area of skin cancer, managing protocols and drug interactions. I feel that these experiences form a solid springboard upon which to excel in my studies in preparation for practicing dentistry here in the USA.

Statements of Excellence for Admission to Dental School

 I would be honored to draft a model first paragraph for your Statement for admission to dental school at no obligation in order to promote my service. Rapid Document Evaluation! I especially enjoy working on behalf of those clients whose stated long term goals represent a significant contribution to the progressive enrichment of humanity, particularly with respect to the Developing World, where I live with my only child Davy, and the cause to which I dedicated my life.

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Sample 1st 2 Paragraphs Dental Residency

A dentist originally from India, after completing my DDS I set about giving my all to dental care near where I live in XXXX Texas. Since March of last year, 2013, I have been serving as the Dental Director of the XXXX Rural Health Center in XXXX, Texas. Prior to that position I worked as an Associate Dentist with XXXX Dental PLLC in XXXX.

I am aware of the competitive nature of your program and it is my profound hope that you will look favorably on my application for two reasons in particular. First, I have demonstrated my unswerving loyalty to the underserved by the fact that I have went to all the trouble to learn Spanish, so that I am able to converse with patients in this language, those with very limited English language ability. This reflects the way that I put the underserved as my priority. In fact, nothing brings me quite as much joy as talking to a dental patient about their needs in their native Spanish. In addition to earning my DDS, and also on behalf of the underserved, I also earned an MBA in 2010 so that I would have the ability to think about and generate creative ideas concerning structural improvements to our oral health care systems, specifically with an eye to making them more accessible for the underserved.


Sample Introduction for the DDS Degree as an International Dentist, Indian Applicant

Still only 28, I am a dentist who has been blessed by the Lord with many opportunities thus far for serving some of the most vulnerable members of my communities both at home in India and now here in America. Even before studying dentistry, I volunteered many hours as a high school student working with mentally challenged, disabled people. I will always remember with special fondness our experiences doing traditional Indian paintings on the floor. While in dental school I volunteered for numerous dental camps organized by my college. For my internship, I choose a school for the blind. Following my graduation, I divided my time between volunteering at a charitable hospital and serving professionally as a dentist in a multispecialty clinic.

Here in America, where I seek to establish myself professionally, my volunteer work is currently with a mobile dental clinic serving primarily the homeless populations of Greenville and Spartanburg County, South Carolina.