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I help as many people as I can free of charge, by drafting a model first paragraph on their behalf. In many if not most cases, I also offer to finish the document on their behalf at this price. I am limited in how many clients I am able to assist primarily by the fact that I have half custody of my baby boy Davy, every 24 hours he is mine for 24 hours, and he does not let me work unless he is asleep. This is also why it sometimes takes me a couple of days to finish your statement once you have made your payment. In short, I only offer to draft complete statements for people whose story excites me, people who I feel strongly are in a unique position to give something of importance to their respective professions. And I only do my best, taking the time to reflect on your story as well, usually doing some internet research on your behalf.

I help applicants to university and graduate school from all over the world. I would be honored to draft a model first paragraph for your Statement at no obligation in order to promote my service. Rapid Document Evaluation! I especially enjoy working on behalf of those clients whose stated long term goals represent a significant contribution to the progressive enrichment of humanity, particularly with respect to the Developing World, where I live with my only child Davy, and the cause to which I dedicated my life.

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I work very hard on each statement that I produce because  I trust you as well to recommend me to your friends and colleagues if you are very pleased with your statement. 

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My service is quite different from other statement writing services on the Internet for several reasons. I am the little guy on the web, not a big business like most of my competitors. You deal directly with me. I answer all of your questions completely free of charge and I am solely responsible for producing a statement that you are very pleased with.

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 If you want your Statement of Purpose or Personal Statement to be successful, you have to write it in such a way as to make those in charge of the selection process curious about you and to look forward to meeting you. You need to portray yourself in your statement as the kind of person that they want to have in their program. I am a practiced master at drafting your story in the best, most eloquent fashion possible, in the way that is most appealing to those who make the selection. I am so certain of my ability that I draft the first paragraph of your statement free of charge and at no further obligation.  If you really like the first paragraph that I produce, then I would then be honored to finish the statement on your behalf. 

Jerome Bruner (born in 1915)

To combat the behaviorist approach to education, Bruner developed cognitive psychology and promoted a constructivist approach--his discovery learning theory is based on the assumption that children learn and remember better what they discover for themselves, as well as the fact that they are better able to remember new information if they connect it to something that they already know.

Bruner’s research and subsequent theories on child development closely aligns with the work of Jean Piaget.

Howard Gardner (born in 1943)

Howard Gardner’s theory of multiple intelligences has redefined educators’ views of how students learn and should be assessed.

Historically-speaking, intelligence has been measured through the ability to problem solve and to demonstrate cognitive ability through various controlled verbal and performance type tasks. 

However, Gardner’s theory broadens the field of how individuals display their intelligence by including the following intelligences: linguistic, logical-mathematical, musical, bodily-kinesthetic, special, interpersonal, and intrapersonal. 

Through Gardner’s influence, greater emphasis has been placed on performance testing and educators have become more conscious of the need for diversification of instructional strategies to match the learning styles and strengths of students.

These pioneers have brought so much change to this field. They have achieved great accomplishments. What will yours be?

Sample 1st Paragraph for the MA Degree in Special Education

I hope to excel in your distinguished program at Syracuse because of the fact that I am a very highly motivated professional and a very hard worker. You program will build upon and amplify many of the things that I learned as an undergraduate student earning my BS in Family Studies and Early Childhood Development. Syracuse’s Green to Gold Program will prepare me for realizing my long term goals in the area of education, helping children with special needs. Currently, I am first and foremost a soldier. My education at Syracuse will help me to better serve my country in many ways, especially after I retire from the military and return to my first love, teaching. My principal professional dream in life is to open an educational facility for special needs children in my home state of North Carolina and to help support their parents throughout the difficult challenges that they face. I owe most of my inspiration to my niece, with who I have been especially close throughout the 13 years that she has been with us.